Good morning, WIP It Uppers. I hope you’re having a good Wednesday.

Three weeks ago I shared a small extract from my up and coming new medical play story, set in the near future where a young burglar, Maria, is sentenced to a day at one of the newly formed punishment clinics in New York, designed to deal with repeat offenders.

I’ve been a bit busy recently making preparations for a Weight Watchers ball I’ve been helping to organise, and haven’t had time to do another WIP It Up Wednesday post. This week, with preparations almost complete for this Saturday’s ball, I’ve found time to share another section from this story. I expect to get editing suggestions in approximately a week and hopefully it might be out before Christmas.

In this snippet, Maria is struggling to cope with being naked around the doctor, his nurse and their security guard, and although she’s been spanked, received enemas and been stripped naked, she’s still struggling to bow down to the punishment team’s demands. Everything they ask of her seems to humiliate her further and the feisty young woman wonders how she will ever get through it.

“Right, young lady,” said Dr Carter, guiding Maria to the centre of the room. “Let’s see how obedient you can be. We’ll have you down on the floor, on all fours, first.”

Maria felt a flush rise to her cheeks as she reluctantly complied with his order. Lowering herself slowly onto her knees, leaning forward she placed her hands flat on the floor, her head hung low.

“Good girl. Now,” he said, patting her behind, “I want you to follow me. No, stay on your hands and knees,” he added, when she started to rise. Maria’s blush deepened as she realised his intent. “When I stop walking around and turn to face you, I want you to approach me, kiss my feet and ask me to begin your obedience training. Okay?” Grasping her hair, Dr Carter pulled her head back and gazed into her eyes. “Answer me,” he demanded, when she stared at him blankly.

“Yes,” Maria whispered, her pulse racing as she wondered how the hell she was going to comply with such demands. What he was asking her to do went a long way beyond humiliating. She wasn’t at all sure she could bring herself to crawl around the room like an animal, naked. But, she reminded herself, it was the only way she was going to get out of there.

“First lesson,” he said, brushing his thumb over her lips. “During obedience training you will address me as sir. Okay?”

Maria nodded. “Okay.” His eyebrows raised and she realised immediately what was expected of her. Taking a deep breath, she gazed up at him, willing her mouth to form the words. “Yes, sir.”

Smiling, he released her and slowly walked away, glancing over his shoulder and patting his upper thigh, as if beckoning a dog to follow.

Swallowing back the nausea that rose in her throat, Maria slowly moved her left hand and left knee forward. He smiled encouragingly and she repeated the movement with her right, quickly getting into a rhythm and trailing behind him around the room. The floor was cold and hard on her hands and knees, but she kept her eyes focused on him as she crawled along, her hips swaying.

“Jesus Christ,” Scott exclaimed, startling her. Stopping in her tracks, Maria glanced over her shoulder, wondering what she had done wrong. “Oh, don’t stop on my account.” Grinning, he rubbed his crotch. “What an amazing ass you’ve got. Sway it some more, baby.”

Embarrassment bloomed on Maria’s cheeks as she turned back to Dr Carter, who beckoned her forward with his crooked finger. Fixing her eyes on his, she headed towards him. Feeling self-conscious about Scott watching her rear end, Maria tried to restrict the swing of her hips, but his wolf whistle told her she had not succeeded. Continuing to move on her hands and knees, Maria stopped at Dr Carter’s feet. Taking a deep breath, she leaned forward and kissed the toe of his right shoe, before shifting sideways and kissing the left.

Sitting back on her heels, she looked up at him. Shocked to see a noticeable bulge in his pants, she raised her gaze to his eyes. “Please, sir, will you teach me…” Pausing, she frowned. She was unsure what she was supposed to say. “Will you…”

Dr Carter smiled. “Ask me to begin your obedience training.”

Maria lowered her gaze and took a deep breath, exhaling slowly. Squatting down in front of her, Dr Carter grasped her chin and tilted her face up towards his. “Please, sir,” she began, trembling as she spoke. “Will you begin my obedience training?”

Nodding, he stood up. “Certainly. Now, get back on all fours and we’ll begin.”


I hope you enjoyed this short extract. I’ll try to share a little more before its upcoming release.

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Carole x

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