Saturday Spankings

For this week’s Saturday Spankings, I am going to use another extract from my new book, tentatively titled The Delinquent Bride. It is still with my editor, and although we had expected to have it published earlier this month, he’s put back final editing by another two weeks so it’s going to be May now.

Last week’s Saturday Spankings offering saw Shelley sent to her room to await her mother. This week’s extract picks up from where her mother caught up with her. Despite her predicament, and her fear of the hairbrush, Shelley still did not bite her tongue and got herself into even more trouble with an already angry Lady Annabelle.

Although this story is situated in part on the Titanic, Shelley is still at her home with her parents in this extract:-

Lady Annabelle frowned at her daughter. “Young lady, a lot of time and money has gone into arranging this wedding. It will be going ahead. Your father is correct. It is time you took a husband. The Duke is a good man and will treat you well.”

Shelley spouted loudly, “Mother, just because you choose to be a doormat to a man, doesn’t mean I have to follow in your footsteps!”

Lady Annabelle gripped her daughter’s wrist firmly. “What has gotten into you?” she demanded. “Again, your father is correct. You do deserve a good hiding. I told you to go to your room earlier, but you had to be defiant and disobey me. Believe me, this time your bottom will pay dearly for your rebellion. It seems a hand spanking is no longer a concern of yours, is it? You, young lady, have left me with no choice but to be much firmer with you.”

I hope you enjoyed this short extract. Don’t forget to head over to Saturday Spankings to read the offerings from some very talented authors.

Carole x

 

 
 

 Saturday Spankings

For this week’s Saturday Spankings I’m going to share another extract from my upcoming story, The Delinquent Bride, based around the Titanic. Its still with my editor at the moment, but we should be doing final editing on it soon. I’m still hopeful it will be published some time this month.

This follows on from last week’s snippet, where Shelley had thrown a tantrum and her father had shocked her by slapping her bottom. Her mother has just told her to go to her room as she intends to spank her properly, and Shelley is standing dumbstruck in the doorway, watching their butler clean up the mess she had made when she knocked a plate from her mother’s hand.

“Shelley, are you still here?” her father’s voice boomed, as he purposefully strode across the room towards her.

Colour quickly drained from her face and Shelley hurried out into the hallway. She ran up the stairs, slammed her bedroom door and sat down on her bed to wait in fearful anticipation of her mother’s visit. Glancing across at her bedside table, Shelley eyed her hairbrush apprehensively, reproaching herself for making the situation even worse. Her mother’s hand was normally enough when it came to spanking her, but she had threatened several times recently to introduce her bottom to the hairbrush. Shelley had thought she was bluffing, but now she was not so certain.

She was dismayed that her parents had refused to listen to reason, and it seemed she would still have to marry the Duke, but now it would be with a sore bottom. Not relishing the thought of a spanking from her mother, coupled by an immediate concern that her father might also partake and deliver one from his own hand, Shelley decided that her only course of action was to run.

I hope you enjoyed this short snippet. Don’t forget to head over to Saturday Spankings to see the offerings from other authors.

Carole x

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My book The Delinquent Bride, based around the Titanic, is still with my editor, but should be published very soon. I shared an extract through Saturday Spankings last week, and intend to do the same this week, but as yesterday marked the 102nd anniversary of the tragic sinking, I wanted to share another small extract from my story, relating directly to the sinking.

I don’t think this gives away any major parts of the plot (I really don’t like ‘spoilers’) as I believe it’s pretty obvious that as my booked is based around Titanic, my main character Shelley is going to find herself on it, and I think people would assume she does survive and her story continues. The majority of my story is actually based after the sinking of the Titanic. I normally share bits that lead up to a spanking scene, and I promise my Saturday Spankings offering will include this, but this short snippet does not:-

Shelley closed her eyes and recalled the splendour of the Titanic in the dockyard only days earlier. When she opened her eyes, a tear rolled down her cheek as the once magnificent vessel floundered in the water, seemingly reluctant to go to her beckoning watery grave.

After what seemed like hours, a loud collective gasp filled the air and those in the lifeboats watched in horror as the ship began to slip under the water. The forward funnel started to disappear into the sea before it broke away. A small explosion was heard, and further explosions sounded from within the ship. The Titanic lifted almost vertical in the water before the strain was too much and she snapped in half. Her lights went out and the distraught onlookers watched in horrified silence as the Titanic once more went vertical before finally sinking beneath the waves.

* * *

For a moment, there was not a sound on the lifeboats after the Titanic had plummeted beneath the waves, but the silence was broken by the screams of those still in the water. The cries of distress went on for a minute or two and a whistle sounded sporadically. Many people on the boats demanded the crew take the lifeboats back and pick up the people in the water, who may very well be their loved ones.

“No, it’s too dangerous. We could be sucked under by the sinking ship,” one of the crew who had rowed the lifeboat next to Shelley’s explained.

Shelley felt helpless and as the sounds of sobbing filled the air, she dropped her head into her hands and started to cry.

I have always been interested in the Titanic and have really enjoyed writing this book, especially researching the Titanic in an attempt to make my story as factual as possible. I hope those who purchase it will enjoy reading it as much as I have enjoyed writing it.

RIP to those poor souls who lost their lives that fateful day.

Carole x

 

Saturday Spankings

I have neglected my blog recently, and not taken part in Saturday Spankings for a few weeks, as I’ve been busy with work and also training for a half marathon walk. As I am relatively unfit I am undertaking a proper walking regime. I’m losing weight, toning up, but I’m also absolutely exhausted when I get home from a training walk and haven’t been bothering to write anything. I have started work on a new book last weekend, and I’m looking forward to having some spare time on Saturday to continue with it, before a 6-mile walk on Sunday will probably leave me sleeping on the sofa again! I’ll quickly do this week’s Saturday Spankings, before I head out to do a 4-mile walk before work.

I’m delighted that The Delinquent Bride, which I first sent to my editor last May, is almost ready for publication. I’ll have one more lot of editing (hopefully!) to do and it should be out some time this month. I had to rewrite a major part of it, and it was put aside for some time. I’m really grateful to another author who went through the first few chapters with me and gave me some advice on writing it.

 I’ve always been fascinated with the Titanic, and I decided to write a story based around it. Its 102 years now since the Titanic set off on her maiden (and unfortunately only) voyage, and this week will also mark the anniversary of her sinking. I’m going to take this week’s Saturday Spankings from an early part of this book.

Shelley Robertson-Bell’s parents have arranged for her to marry Alexander Armitage, the Duke of Southampton, on the day the Titanic sets off on her maiden voyage. Shelley is reluctant to marry anyone, and she tells her parents this the night before her wedding. They’re none too pleased and in this scene, after she throws a tantrum and pushes a plate of cakes out of her mother’s hand, her father gives her a smack for the first time ever, which leaves her reeling. Her mother has always handled her discipline until now.

“For goodness sake,” barked Shelley. “Didn’t you hear me? I don’t want a stupid cake.”

Stunned by her outburst, Shelley watched mesmerised as bits of broken plate scattered across the table and carpet, and the cakes landed in a heap among the shards of broken crockery.

Her father’s grip tightened on Shelley’s hand and he quickly stood up and pulled her to her feet. “This behaviour is unacceptable! Get to your room this instant,” he bellowed. He shook his daughter roughly, spun her around and landed a hard smack on her bottom.

I hope you enjoyed this short snippet. I’ll share another next week. Don’t forget to head over to the Saturday Spankings blog to see the offerings from other authors.

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Carole x

Valentine Paddles

For this week’s Saturday Spankings, I’m going to yet again share an extract from my latest story, Naughty Immy’s Punishment.

This is the editor’s blurb:-

Imogen loves it when her husband Adam takes on his daddy role and spoils her, cuddles her, and treats her like his baby girl, but she knows that when she has been particularly naughty her daddy must discipline her… and today she was very, very naughty.

 A silly prank on her part almost got Adam in trouble with the police, and Immy knows she is in for a long, thorough, and incredibly embarrassing punishment from her firm daddy.

 Publisher’s Note: Naughty Immy’s Punishment is a novella-length erotic short story that includes spankings, anal play, exhibitionism, humiliation, age play, medical play, sexual scenes, and more. If such material offends you, please don’t buy this book.

 Additional Note: This story focuses primarily on a single incident in the lives of a fictionalized couple and the results of that incident. The age play relationship and associated punishments and other interactions described in the story are intended purely as erotica and not as an attempt to portray a realistic relationship which includes age play elements.

Naughty Immy's Punishment by Carole Archer

I hope you enjoy this short extract, which is taken from a little after where last week’s snippet left off. After Adam suspected Immy was fibbing about being ill, he suggested an enema would make her feel better. She quickly decided to tell the truth, that she wasn’t really sick. She was humiliated when he took her across his knee and phoned her boss to let him know she had intended to phone in sick when there was nothing wrong with her, and she was furious when Adam asked her elderly boss to let him know if she didn’t show up for work and he would deal with her. This follows on from Adam’s phone call to her boss:-

A minute or so later, Adam put the phone down, tugged the thermometer out of her rectum, and slapped her butt sharply. “Get up,” he told her, and Imogen quickly shuffled up from across her husband’s lap.

“Why did you say that to him?” she demanded petulantly, really angry that her boss knew she had intended to phone in sick when there was really nothing wrong with her.

“Would you rather I’d kept you home, given you an enema, and informed him I was doing that?” he asked her, regarding her sternly.

Imogen pouted and shook her head. “No,” she snapped, lowering her eyes when his brow furrowed in annoyance.

“Unless you want another spanking, young lady, I’d lose that attitude and get yourself ready for work. I can spank you again if necessary,” he warned. “I promise you that would not be a hardship.” 

If you enjoyed this snippet and would like to read more, Naughty Immy’s Punishment is available on Amazon – http://www.amazon.com/Naughty-Immys-Punishment-Carole-Archer-ebook/dp/B00IBR1XEQ/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1391933099&sr=1-1&keywords=Naughty+Immy%27s+Punishment

and Blushing Books – http://www.blushingbooks.com/index.php?l=product_detail&p=2716

Don’t forget to head over to the blog hop to read the offerings from all the other Saturday Spankings authors – http://saturdayspankings.blogspot.co.uk/?zx=3281eee4236657ed

Carole x

Valentine Paddles

For this week’s Saturday Spankings, I’m going to share another extract from my latest story, Naughty Immy’s Punishment.

This is the editor’s blurb:-

Imogen loves it when her husband Adam takes on his daddy role and spoils her, cuddles her, and treats her like his baby girl, but she knows that when she has been particularly naughty her daddy must discipline her… and today she was very, very naughty.

 A silly prank on her part almost got Adam in trouble with the police, and Immy knows she is in for a long, thorough, and incredibly embarrassing punishment from her firm daddy.

 Publisher’s Note: Naughty Immy’s Punishment is a novella-length erotic short story that includes spankings, anal play, exhibitionism, humiliation, age play, medical play, sexual scenes, and more. If such material offends you, please don’t buy this book.

 Additional Note: This story focuses primarily on a single incident in the lives of a fictionalized couple and the results of that incident. The age play relationship and associated punishments and other interactions described in the story are intended purely as erotica and not as an attempt to portray a realistic relationship which includes age play elements.

Naughty Immy's Punishment by Carole Archer

I hope you enjoy this short extract, which follows on from where last week’s left off, as Adam threatened to spank his wife again if she did not allow him to take her temperature rectally:-

Imogen clenched her fists and nodded, holding her breath and swallowing anxiously as she felt the thin wand slip past her reluctant sphincter and into her bottom hole. “Please take it out, Daddy,” she begged as the thermometer was eventually deeply seated inside her. 

Unfortunately for Imogen, her pleas fell on deaf ears, and for the next few minutes she concentrated on her shallow breathing, her eyes screwed tightly shut, waiting anxiously for the thermometer to be taken out again. As usual, those few minutes squirming uncomfortably across her husband’s lap with a rectal thermometer poking out of her bottom hole felt like hours. She thought her daddy was very cruel, deliberately tormenting her by constantly twirling the thermometer inside her bottom hole, but she sensibly kept her thoughts to herself. She frowned and chewed anxiously on her lower lip, determined not to react and give him a reason to spank her hard once more.

Imogen released a deep breath and unclenched her small fists when the thermometer was eventually removed from her bottom. She looked at the palms of her hands and frowned at the marks left by her nails, which had pressed into the soft flesh as she resisted the thermometer’s intrusion into her bottom hole. 

She waited anxiously for his verdict, and her heart sank when he patted her bottom gently and told her, “Your temperature’s fine, little girl, so I wonder if you’ve been telling me fibs about being sick.”

If you enjoyed this snippet and would like to read more, Naughty Immy’s Punishment is available on Amazon – http://www.amazon.com/Naughty-Immys-Punishment-Carole-Archer-ebook/dp/B00IBR1XEQ/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1391933099&sr=1-1&keywords=Naughty+Immy%27s+Punishment

and Blushing Books – http://www.blushingbooks.com/index.php?l=product_detail&p=2716

Don’t forget to head over to the blog hop to read the offerings from all the other Saturday Spankings authors – http://saturdayspankings.blogspot.co.uk/?zx=3281eee4236657ed

Carole x

 

Valentine Paddles

For this week’s Saturday Spankings, I’m going to share another extract from my newest story, Naughty Immy’s Punishment. I’m pleased with how well it’s doing in the Amazon charts, but I really hope it reaches the top 100 erotica, as all of Stormy Night’s books seem to have done before.

This is the editor’s blurb:-

Imogen loves it when her husband Adam takes on his daddy role and spoils her, cuddles her, and treats her like his baby girl, but she knows that when she has been particularly naughty her daddy must discipline her… and today she was very, very naughty.

 A silly prank on her part almost got Adam in trouble with the police, and Immy knows she is in for a long, thorough, and incredibly embarrassing punishment from her firm daddy.

 Publisher’s Note: Naughty Immy’s Punishment is a novella-length erotic short story that includes spankings, anal play, exhibitionism, humiliation, age play, medical play, sexual scenes, and more. If such material offends you, please don’t buy this book.

 Additional Note: This story focuses primarily on a single incident in the lives of a fictionalized couple and the results of that incident. The age play relationship and associated punishments and other interactions described in the story are intended purely as erotica and not as an attempt to portray a realistic relationship which includes age play elements.

Naughty Immy's Punishment by Carole Archer

I hope you enjoy this short extract:-

Clenching her butt cheeks together, an automatic reaction every time he felt this awful procedure was necessary, she instinctively kicked her legs when she felt the tip of the thermometer pressing intrusively against her tight anus. Her daddy continued to apply firm pressure for several seconds, and she gritted her teeth, stubbornly squeezing her butt cheeks tightly together.

When she felt him remove the thermometer at last, after an unsuccessful attempt to seat it inside her bottom, she whimpered sadly, knowing full well what was coming next. She listened carefully and heard him put the thermometer down. She then tensed her bottom cheeks and waited in fearful anticipation of the first, stinging smack. 

Finally, his hand smacked down hard on her bottom, and she squealed in pain. Without pausing, he landed several more hard smacks on her squirming bottom, until she protested loudly, “No Daddy!” She kicked her legs and begged him to stop, to no avail, and he landed more than a dozen hard smacks to the centre of her now stinging bottom.

“I’m sorry, Daddy. I promise I’ll be a good girl!” she shrieked, relieved when his hand finally rested on her bottom and rubbed gently.

“Now hold still, or I’ll give you a proper spanking,” he warned, parting her butt cheeks once more. 

If you enjoyed this snippet and would like to read more, Naughty Immy’s Punishment is available on Amazon – http://www.amazon.com/Naughty-Immys-Punishment-Carole-Archer-ebook/dp/B00IBR1XEQ/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1391933099&sr=1-1&keywords=Naughty+Immy%27s+Punishment

and Blushing Books – http://www.blushingbooks.com/index.php?l=product_detail&p=2716

Don’t forget to head over to the blog hop to read the offerings from all the other Saturday Spankings authors – http://saturdayspankings.blogspot.co.uk/?zx=3281eee4236657ed

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Naughty Immy’s Punishment is now available on Amazon.

 

Imogen loves it when her husband Adam takes on his daddy role and spoils her, cuddles her, and treats her like his baby girl, but she knows that when she has been naughty her daddy must discipline her… and today she was very, very naughty.

A silly prank on her part almost got Adam in trouble with the police, and Immy knows that now she is in for a long, thorough, and incredibly embarrassing punishment from her firm daddy.

Publisher’s Note: Naughty Immy’s Punishment is a novella-length erotic short story that includes spankings, anal play, exhibitionism, humiliation, age play, medical play, sexual scenes, and more. If such material offends you, please don’t buy this book.

Additional Note: This story focuses primarily on a single incident in the lives of a fictionalized couple and the results of that incident. The age play relationship and associated punishments and other interactions described in the story are intended purely as erotica and not as an attempt to portray a realistic relationship which includes age play elements.

Naughty Immy’s Punishment is on sale via this link – http://www.amazon.com/Naughty-Immys-Punishment-Carole-Archer-ebook/dp/B00IBR1XEQ/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1391933595&sr=8-1&keywords=Naughty+Immy%27s+Punishment

For this week’s Saturday Spankings, I’m going to share an extract from my as yet unreleased age play novel, which was tentatively titled Daddy’s Discipline. It is going to be published under the title Naughty Immy’s Punishment and should be available within the next few days. The book cover (which I’m delighted with) and blurb has been sent to me this morning and I’ve just signed my contract. Even better, I see there isn’t the usual 8-sentence limit this week, which means I can share a little more of my story.

I enjoyed having a go at age play, and although this snippet I’m using for Saturday Spankings is quite playful, the majority of the story relates to Immy receiving a real punishment from her husband Adam after being very naughty.

This is the editor’s blurb:-

Imogen loves it when her husband Adam takes on his daddy role and spoils her, cuddles her, and treats her like his baby girl, but she knows that when she has been particularly naughty her daddy must discipline her… and today she was very, very naughty.

 A silly prank on her part almost got Adam in trouble with the police, and Immy knows she is in for a long, thorough, and incredibly embarrassing punishment from her firm daddy.

 Publisher’s Note: Naughty Immy’s Punishment is a novella-length erotic short story that includes spankings, anal play, exhibitionism, humiliation, age play, medical play, sexual scenes, and more. If such material offends you, please don’t buy this book.

 Additional Note: This story focuses primarily on a single incident in the lives of a fictionalized couple and the results of that incident. The age play relationship and associated punishments and other interactions described in the story are intended purely as erotica and not as an attempt to portray a realistic relationship which includes age play elements.

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I hope you enjoy this short extract:-

“Look at this mess,” he said, indicating the clothes strewn all over the floor. Imogen chewed her lower lip and looked to the floor, her pussy twitching when Adam scolded her. She hated to be in real trouble with her Daddy, but she loved it when they fooled around and he pretended to be angry with her. Glancing up and seeing the playful twinkle in his eyes, she realised this was one of those times.

 “I’m sorry, Daddy,” she whispered, squatting down to pick up the discarded clothing and dropping it into the laundry basket. “I didn’t mean to be a naughty girl,” she pouted, shoving her thumb into her mouth as she approached him and looked up with big blue sad eyes. “Please don’t spank me, Daddy,” she begged, incoherently with her thumb still stuck in her mouth. She struggled to keep the smile off her face at the realisation that she was finally going to get a bit of play time with her Daddy before bed.

“Immy, I think a spanking is just what you need,” he told her, grasping her arm and marching her to their bedroom, smacking her bottom with each step they took. “I can see I’ve left your behaviour unchecked for too long,” he scolded, stopping to land a slightly harder smack on her jiggling bum. Imogen squealed with both shock and delight. His smacks were hard, but when her Daddy sat down on the bed, she willingly placed herself across his lap, without hesitation.

She shuffled herself into a more comfortable position and smiled when she felt his arm wrap snugly around her waist. Allowing herself to relax fully, she sighed with pleasure when he rested his hand gently on her bottom.

The instant his big hand smacked down on her slender bottom, Imogen beamed with delight. She loved her Daddy’s playful spankings, which he often told her were a gentle reminder for her to be a good girl. Only if she was naughty did the smacks get harder, and Imogen had no intention of getting that kind of spanking tonight. She grinned and wiggled her bottom as her Daddy’s hand slowly warmed her seat.

 Imogen squirmed with pleasure when he continued to spank her bottom gently over the seat of her pink panties. After several dozen spanks, he gripped the waistband of her underwear and she helpfully raised her hips, smiling brightly when he whisked the garment down to her knees.

 Imogen sighed happily when her Daddy lifted his knee, pushing her bottom up higher. A hard smack stung her bottom and she instinctively reached back, smiling when her Daddy grasped her wrist and held her arm against her back. She loved being held securely across his lap. It made her feel safe and loved.

 Glancing over her shoulder, she watched her Daddy raise his hand high before cracking it down on her upturned bare bottom. She shrieked loudly, kicking her legs as his hand smacked down once more. “Bad girl,” he scolded, spanking the centre of her bottom numerous times. Imogen squirmed, feeling the burn in her bottom increase, and soon she was howling and kicking her legs, her Daddy’s stinging smacks landing randomly across her bottom and upper thighs.

 “Please Daddy, I’ll be a good girl,” she promised, but the smile on her face indicated she was not entirely unhappy with her current predicament.

Naughty Immy’s Punishment should be available for sale this week and I will post a link on my blog at this time. (Sun Feb 8 – Naughty Immy’s Punishment is now available on Amazon – http://www.amazon.com/Naughty-Immys-Punishment-Carole-Archer-ebook/dp/B00IBR1XEQ/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1391933099&sr=1-1&keywords=Naughty+Immy%27s+Punishment

and Blushing Books – http://www.blushingbooks.com/index.php?l=product_detail&p=2716

Don’t forget to head over to Saturday Spankings to read the offerings from all the talented authors – http://saturdayspankings.blogspot.co.uk/?zx=3281eee4236657ed

Carole x

I was tempted to use an extract from my new age play book, Daddy’s Discipline, which is with the copy editor and should hopefully be released very soon. But I thought I might jinx it by using a snippet from that before it’s been given final approval.

So instead this week’s Saturday Spankings comes from Melissa’s Punishment Examination. Melissa has been skipping work to spend time with her friends and when her bosses, Dr Williams and his wife Barbara, discover her deceit they ask her to submit to a thoroughly humiliating punishment. Her only alternative is to lose the job she loves.

“I’m going to take your temperature now,” he told her, slipping the end of the thermometer into her rectum. It was too much and Melissa fought desperately once more.

Dr Williams sighed deeply and handed the displaced thermometer to his wife. “You are being so naughty,” Dr Williams scolded, gripping Melissa firmly around the waist and smacking his gloved hand down onto her upturned bottom. Melissa yelled loudly and kicked her legs hard. She continued to kick as he delivered a very sharp spanking to her bare backside, also landing a few smacks on her thighs.

“I’m sorry, I’ll be good,” yelled Melissa tearfully as the sting in her bottom built to an uncomfortable level. A few more smacks landed before Dr Williams stopped spanking her, and Melissa whimpered when he immediately thrust his finger into her anus again, probing her for a while before finally withdrawing, to Melissa’s great relief.

If you enjoyed this snippet and would like to read more, Melissa’s Punishment Examination is available for sale at:-

http://www.amazon.com/Melissas-Punishment-Examination-Carole-Archer-ebook/dp/B00GA6NNBG/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1383347303&sr=8-1&keywords=melissa%27s+punishment

Don’t forget to visit http://www.saturdayspankings.blogspot.co.uk/?zx=be065a19799fd27a to read the offerings from all the other talented authors.

Carole x

 

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Domestic discipline story
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